If you’re joining me from Susan Peterson Wisnewski, author of Chasing the Rainbow, then welcome!
Something a little different for the Romance Weekly Hop this week.
We were tasked with writing a piece of flash fiction in the word count range of 100-150 that included the words: Candle, scarf, and chocolate.
Now, seeing as this is my first ever attempt at flash fiction and I couldn’t think of a story that could be resolved in that word count, I decided to write a bit of a random scene instead (coming in at 151 words, annoyingly)! Hope you enjoy π
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βYouβre going to have to come out of there,β he teased, a smile flickering at the corner of his lips.
βNo,β she said, her words a muffled mess through the thick scarf wrapped around her neck and half of her face like an Egyptian mummy. She continued to warm her chilled fingers over the lit candle that stood in the middle of their table, the view of the lake spread out around them, beautiful but cold.
βFine.β He shrugged and plopped one of the rich truffles into his mouth, moaning as he bit into it.
She pouted behind the scarf, blinking as a snowflake fell on the tip of her nose. βAlright!β she said, and yanked the scarf down past her mouth.
He smiled, and plopped a chocolate between her open lips. She jerked the scarf back into place and sighed at the velvet sweetness that burst from the truffle.
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Now why not check out what Victoria Barbour wrote in response to this flash fiction challenge? π
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Progress Report:
Status of Fifth Manuscript: Writing first draft.
Word count: 3739 (Total word count: 28509)
Books read: 4/4! π
End of August Indie Review: Written and ready.
Awesome little scene…left me wanting more. I loved the descriptions and the tension you managed to convey in so few words. Impressive π
Thank you so much! π It’s been fun trying out different writing exercises lately, I just need to find the time to do some more prompted stuff!
Thank you so much for commenting π
Very charming little scene, lovely! π
Thank you, sometimes it’s nice to write just some fluff for fun π
Thank you for commenting π
How nice to be served a truffle like that!
I’m not sure if you know this, but you won a book on my blog. Please stop by and confirm.
I didn’t know! π I haven’t caught up on all my blogging yet!
Thank you so much, will pop over there right now!
I really like that! Great job – those little prompts are wonderful. I wrote flash fiction almost exclusively for almost 2 years, and love it. π
2 years? You must be a major pro at it now! π It was my first attempt, so wasn’t really sure what I was doing! Was great fun though.
Thank you so much for commenting π
I definitely enjoyed it. I also loved having word count restrictions. It really helped my writing because I had to learn to say things in either as few or as many words as possible. Lots of fun! I think you did terrific π
Love the images.
Thank you so much π
You and I popped our Flash Fiction cherries today. Good job!
It was fun, right? Definitely something I will try again π
Thank you for commenting π
Aside from wanting to read more of everyone’s stories today, you know what I want more than anything? Truffles! So many truffles this week. Great job M.
I was having a bit of a truffle craving, and it definitely showed through my writing π
Thank you so much for commenting π
I love romance in the winter – something about the cold is just so provoking.
It really is, right? I do like the crisp cold and the wrapping up cosy! π
Thank you so much for commenting π
Yeah – provocative is what I meant. Duh. π
Too cute, Mishka!
Thank you so much! π
I’m starting to get a hankering for truffles π Loved your story!!!
I love truffles. And I love your story. Congrats on a great one.
Now I just added truffles to my shopping order. Thanks….
151 words though! That’s kind of painful. Just barely out of reach.
I know, right? It was driving me up the wall! π
Really enjoyed it Mishka, Fun!
Thank you so much π